Kids
need to write, right?
They’re
not going to get better at it if they don’t do it. Frequently. In every class.
You
may be thinking to yourself, “But I’m not a writing teacher. I wasn’t taught
how to teach writing. I’m not a confident writer myself. How can I possibly
teach my students how to write?”
Relax
a moment. I know that if you’ve read this far, you know how to read. You
probably have even identified that I used a few sentence fragments in the
preceding paragraphs, and you may or may not have been comfortable with my
decision to do so. But since I know you know how to read, I also know that you
can read a student’s writing and tell whether it makes sense and whether it
says something. That’s the first step--and the most important one--to becoming
a teacher whose students write.
I’m
not asking you to become a writing teacher if you’re not one already and if the
class you teach doesn’t require it. What I am asking is that, no matter what
you teach, you ask your students to write.
To
help you make this happen, I’m going to clue you in on a little tip, an acronym
many English teachers use that will jumpstart your ability to design
interesting and rigorous writing: RAMP.
RAMP
stands for Role, Audience, Mode, and Purpose. These are four elements students
can identify for themselves when they are dissecting a writing prompt:
Role: What persona or perspective am I adopting as a writer?
Audience: To whom or for whom am I writing?
Mode: What type of writing am I being asked to do (category and
genre/format)? Probable types include narrative, expository, and persuasive.
Purpose: Why am I writing this?
As
I mentioned above, many teachers use this to help students determine what
they’re supposed to do in response to a writing prompt. Decisions regarding
word choice, degree of formality, organization, and content relate directly to
the four elements of RAMP. I’m going to write in a different style if I’m
writing a formal lab report for publication in a chemistry journal than I am if
I compose a text message to a friend to find out about his date last Saturday.
Not
only can RAMP be useful to students, but RAMP can come in handy for teachers
who are trying to create more interesting real-world writing assignments for
their students. Asking students to adopt different roles and to write for
varied purposes not only can make writing more fun but also “ramp up” the rigor
in writing assignments.
Here
are some deconstructed writing prompt samples to help you see how easy (and
perhaps even fun) creating writing activities using RAMP can be.
An old-school, boring essay topic:
Write
an essay about the themes in Moby Dick. Select three themes, and support
each with evidence from the novel.
ROLE: A student
AUDIENCE: The bored English teacher
MODE: Expository/literary analysis
PURPOSE: To inform and explain
A more exciting Moby Dick essay (spoiler alert):
You
are the psychiatrist treating Ishmael as the lone survivor of the Pequod's
sinking. Since the patient refuses to speak, you have only his manuscript (the
novel Moby Dick) to use to diagnose him and recommend a treatment. Using
the evidence, write a report to the hospital’s Board of Governors about your
patient detailing the nature of the trauma, the effect on Ishmael, and your
plan for treatment.
ROLE: Hospital psychiatrist
AUDIENCE: The hospital’s Board of Directors
MODE: Expository/analytical
PURPOSE: To analyze Ishmael’s character and
what mental or emotional support or treatment he may need.
Something for the historians:
You
are an educated woman in England in the 1790s who has just read Mary
Wollstonecraft’s Vindication of the Rights of Women. Inspired by what
she has said, you decide to send in an anonymous editorial to the local
newspaper about your reactions to the essay, but you know that a letter from a
woman will be ignored. Write your editorial as if a man wrote it, but still try
to get your points across. Make specific reference to Wollstonecraft’s ideas in
your editorial.
ROLE: A British woman in the 1790s pretending
to be a man
AUDIENCE: The editors and readers of the local
newspaper
MODE: Argumentative
PURPOSE: To persuade readers that your
thoughts, reactions, and opinions are correct.
American history from an offbeat perspective:
As
a termite gnawing on the table on which the Declaration of Independence was
signed, you had the chance to witness the event firsthand and overhear the
comments of those who signed it. Write a letter to your British cousin giving
your account of what happened that day, including what you heard from the
signers about their excitement, concerns, and hopes.
ROLE: Eavesdropping termite
AUDIENCE: A British relative overseas
MODE: Narrative letter
PURPOSE: To summarize what you heard and viewpoints of the signers
To explain a scientific concept in simplest terms:
Write
a children’s book to explain mitosis to a third grader in an interesting,
entertaining, educational way. You may illustrate your book.
ROLE: Yourself (a brainy science student)
AUDIENCE: A third grader who could care less about cell division
MODE: Expository/informational (may also be narrative)
PURPOSE: To explain mitosis in a way a third
grader would understand
Bringing science to the real world:
You
have recently become aware that neighbors have been using a nearby field as a
dumping ground for their household trash and are concerned about the effect
this might have on the wooded area and creekbed nearby. Write a letter to the
City Council expressing your concerns and asking them to take measures to halt
this potentially dangerous hazard to the ecosystem.
ROLE: A concerned citizen
AUDIENCE: City Council
MODE: Persuasive letter
PURPOSE: To expose a biohazard and stop further damage
Writing in math can be fun, too:
Write
a love letter from the Pythagorean Theorem to pi.
ROLE: The amorous Pythagorean Theorem
AUDIENCE: 3.14159265359…
MODE: Personal/love letter
PURPOSE: To declare your undying love and admiration
Let’s not forget the performing arts:
You
are a critic from an entertainment magazine who attended last night’s choir
concert. Write a review so that your readers who didn’t attend will know what
they missed and what you--the expert music critic--thought of the performance.
Your readers will appreciate lively writing and vivid details in your critique.
ROLE: Music critic
AUDIENCE: The readers of your magazine
MODE: Expository/arts review
PURPOSE: To critique the performance and
provide details for readers who weren’t there.
Something cross curricular and controversial:
You,
Karl Marx, have recently completed your Communist Manifesto and are
looking for the perfect cover art for the paperback edition of your book.
Consider the artists who are working around this time, and select one whom you
think will be the best candidate to create an appropriate artwork to showcase
your ideas. Write a letter to that artist telling him about your ideas and
convincing him or her to create an artwork for your cover.
ROLE: Karl Marx
AUDIENCE: A 19th century artist of your choice
MODE: Persuasive letter
PURPOSE: To convince the artist to design a
book cover
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It’s
relatively easy to come up with a writing activity with a little creativity and
the assistance of RAMP to help you sort things out. I encourage you to give it
a try. You don’t have to grade for spelling or grammar; in this type of
writing, the content and understanding are most important. That’s the key to
Writing to Learn.
Thanks
for giving your students a writing workout once in a while.